Outlast HighLights! I demand criticism!

Hello world! I decided to try myself in video editing, there was no material for editing, so I decided to pass the horror story under the type of Outlast and mount funny moments. Please good people do not judge strictly, tell me what can be added and what should be removed, and in general how it turned out?

And here are more or less significant moments:
01:30 Dratuti
02:50 Wupsen and Puppsen
03:45 John Cena
04:32 First meeting
06:00 Freedom to Parrots
06:51 Kick in the back
08:10 Second meeting
08:37 Escape from Papani
10:00 Got caught!
10:47 Let it go
11:00 Disappearance
11:25 Unlucky Escape
12:07 Second attempt
13:58 VJLINK met his son
14:55 Oh how funny