Liberty City Rampage (Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas)

Very good for a start. For more descriptions of the situation and actions. Realism fails a little, it's still a story, not a game. It is so easy to kill a person without emotion, even being a car thief is impossible. And so, go on! Maybe the forum will be revived again.

In all this chaos, or maybe just out of fear, they did not notice that the explosion damaged one of the engines, and, having flown a couple of meters, the plane crashed into the water, burying the remaining participants in the deal. - in a voice xD
Generally, good. Go on, intrigued.

Stop mocking the dialogues. Unless, of course, you abandon this case.