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UnHaul 26.03.20 08:57 pm

Book-the story \"a Foreign territory\" (Dead Space 3)

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Dark1994 26.03.20

nays nays,very,author, let's исчо111

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UnHaul 26.03.20

Added Part III: All only begins.

Thanks to all who read.
Looking forward to your comments, suggestions, all will respect ;)

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tabak96 26.03.20

UnHaul
Continued in first post drop.

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Agent MaldYr 26.03.20

>>It is just starting up.
What does?Begin!How can you be a writer if you do not know
P. S. I gave up after the middle of the night from nightmares,this oil oil,a tautology... you know that scolopendra with a level of intelligence slightly above the floor and knowledge of the language a little bit further primer,writes:class,the shydevra,etc., but make no mistake, especially such writers in the Internet to:;% and more!

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UnHaul 26.03.20

Agent Mulder
Don't like it.
Maybe it's just not for you.

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Toth 26.03.20

Author +1

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tatopus 26.03.20

A continuation will be?)))))


P. S. the story of the class!

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UnHaul 26.03.20

Added Chapter IV: I'm not alone...

An enjoyable read.

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tabak96 26.03.20

UnHaul
well done +10

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Zzz..... 26.03.20

UP UP UP UP !!!

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UnHaul 26.03.20

Added Chapter V: the New pursuers

Waiting for your comments.

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Dark1994 26.03.20

UnHaul
good,but too many times you used the word bitch:D

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Zzz..... 26.03.20

UP !now let's start reading...
PS Yes,I have not read,but up'and dostoino)
ZYY SOR,laziness)

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tatopus 26.03.20

When's the sequel?

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UnHaul 26.03.20

tatopus
The continuation plan at the end of the summer.

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Agent MaldYr 26.03.20

UnHaul & N9.N1ck my opinion with regards to everything: whatever you're doing - do it well or not do it at all... can't write correctly - do not write,can not put a string so that read without tears(with laughter) and disgust - do not write.Everyone needs to do their job,then Amateurs and incompetents will be less and order more!(IMHO)

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UnHaul 26.03.20

Agent Mulder
It does not agree.

From myself I will say: you Know many artists that at first I wrote\drew complete crap, but over time their work became quite a good work.
So, (IMHO) no matter what Hobbies you have not been, as if they bad they did not work, we should strive to cultivate.

After the summer break, you will soon be able to see the continuation of the story =)

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fallshirmegger 26.03.20

UnHaul
The big story will be?

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UnHaul 26.03.20

fallshirmegger
Most likely Yes.

There is an idea to divide the story into 2-3 acts each 5-10 chapters.
Written while roughly 60% of the first act.

Will post a new Chapter.

PS Advise, where else can you spread the story ?