Area GO-schnick (Half-Life 2)

Hmm, so I should read now or not?) I have already read 1/3 last night, today read can.

If you're going to re-read, then re-read the most recent file with that place where stopped.

Bad beta big update. Reread from the beginning. Grammar-nazi assistance required.

http://alyx-haters.ru/forum/18-337-2#19072

Grammar-nazi assistance required.
I can not yet, read another book. May read yours to the end of the week.

It is possible to put here a piece of one that a sequel must be after 28.08.11 14:22?

I'll just post the link to D-A, where he will priceplan file with complete, updated and continued version of the story.

So, meet the same global update. Unfortunately, they are not global in my own opinion, because you're a bunch of unrealized ideas. Read first (Yes, I'm a sadist).

http://alyx-haters.ru/forum/18-337-2#19099

Hmm, from the beginning? Me at the time, given that I don't remember when the last time I read RL...

there are a bunch of unrealized ideas
I get those a lot in the mapping... the stories rarely, usually manage to cover everything, and even contrary, ideas are sometimes not enough.

Unrealized because of time constraints this morning I had to go to hospitalization from the military, but this case is delayed for several months. Besides writing he has RL work, and there how's it going with the Park.

PS I slightly changed the balance of good and evil in the soul of GG.

Well, considering that I didn't say by the end of which week I read it, we can assume that even before I have time. To the beginning of the week.

Yes, I'm a sadist
As if there are still someone who doesn't know about it.

Where is the excerpt from 28.08.11 14:22?

First vpechatlenieto, now under the name of the author there is a picture with AR2 and the sign of the Alliance.

Detailed commentariorum, read, great.

Comments (31 piece)
That way for years to 2070-nd they will be so much that the Ground will be known as "that one spiked ball, studded with Citadels".
And by the 2300-ridden Citadels will be so many that they start to teleport to each other. And the Earth will be known as the get that planet out of the Dark Alloy.

On the 28th page, the picture is crooked SMG is inserted.

The flight of the army Vigilante
By the way, I did not understand why you write Vigilant and not Nihilanth? Preparation for printing in hardcover, and change the names to avoid copyright issues?

hanged from the yardarm of almost all politicians of the world importance: Medvedev, Putin, Colin Powell, rice, Obama, Angela Merkel...
What about Lukashenka? He fell to the Alliance by its very nature it left?

What can a terrorist do with a mutilated liver alcohol caught in the channels of the homeless?
Well, for example, grind and pour someone's food. Or gain these bodies and throw them at people. They stink I suppose.

So, let's try. 6a65... by Driving sixteen-digit code, I pressed the button.
Why isn't the entire sixteen-digit code is given?

Still took revenge on her painful biting her bottom lip.
Had tongue bite. Then it would be nothing bad about the Alliance wouldn't.

I wonder if that girl wants a fight, then who's she gonna shoot?
I think it will shoot past. Mainly in the sky and the asphalt.

I even erased his real name from her memory, leaving only the first letters of the initials. And now I'm only a Lieutenant of the armed forces-647915561031.
Yeah! We are already a step closer to the Officer's name is -21!

Someone calls to God for help, Irina
Unless religion is left?

–Just aim at the rebels and pull the trigger!
It's good that she at least knows how to aim.
It is a pity that does not understand how to press the trigger. :-(.

I see that there are jerks man is a rebel, performing some ridiculous dance of death on the edge of the roof.
At this point I laughed. In the voice.

then put me on his feet and Irina. Under the gun we removed from the structure
Some rebels absolutely stupid, why didn't he shoot him when I saw what he did?

I think the picture with Gregory better to move on the 81st page, there is just he mentioned.

Sorry had not had the opportunity to capture them in any way.
And that camera in the eye even when the Alliance have not yet learned how to embed?

I a little changed the balance of good and evil in the soul of GG.
Moreover, not only HS. Irina too. For example, in the scene of the shooting extra of the rebels she used to get angry on 10-31 for what he does, and now on the contrary, wants to KILL EVERYONE.

–So, you are now on the street of Stalin.
Hmm, Stalin street? Perhaps if Stalin to the time of the invasion would still be alive, the Alliance would have made him Consul. Yes?

Yes, and I too – I killed one once with a bastard leytenantik, when he served in the Patrol.
In my opinion, it is too often recalls this.

Anna manages to pick up a weapon, but she wisely departs to the woods and hangs it on the back
Is the barrel SS soldier will not submit a signal on which they will be able to find?

Well, better if "crown of thorns", not the mask.
"Crown of thorns mask"?

A little inaccurate, because the last letter means "Sutch.Ki".
Antimat PG vulgar, does not understand that Sutch.Ki can be the trees. I, for example, first it is about the trees thought. No, really.

moreover, he refused all treatments, except for binding, Yes, and they also didn't want to go.
Hmm, and what are the optional treatments?

While on the other hand, from the whole list the only one I was really not quite clean before the law.
Well, I wouldn't say that. Given that until recently, nobody knew about what he collects DRAMATIC, there is a possibility that everything on this list was also not very clean. Just nobody knew about it.

Although the sophisticated torture will leave for another face.
Hmm, if he really was with the help of the vortigaunts, will be able to catch it and try?

To my face gushing fountain of blood, I rip a long piece of dirty ribbon of intestines from his stomach and shove them into the mouth of the rebel. Then go to the sink, to wash hands all his internal shit. Hate. I hate you...
Sat down next to Irina on the bed, I say,
And it's not wiped, and speaks with her inner shit rebel on the face, right?

–Come on, from the dead at least can't wait for the ambush...
Well, I wouldn't say that. If the zombies can still be called alive (or half alive), nekromanteio so I will not mention. And they recently, they staged an ambush. So he is wrong.

Ha, and I thought Paranormal Division we only have bikes in there.
I wonder what primarily engaged in the Paranormal Department? Climb the Old Abandoned Houses™?

2G
So did someone access level 2G?

What kind of threat they can imagine me, an ordinary operational officer GO without access to classified information?
He's just too tenacious. If he had died earlier (before the uprising), the order for his murder likely wouldn't have.

But why they made war, which could eventually destroy the entire planet and an entire species of intelligent (?) creatures? WHY?
To protect your fat ass.©

His eyes seemed to say, "Well, now you have the detachment came the undead...".
"... all the Holy creatures get -1 to initiative.", or what was it?

Error (~100, if you count typos)
And right, why?
Can really? Although, I think I already pointed out this error.

To have a funnel...
*Well

We all know who he was before he came to Town No. 17, we also know WHO he once helped.
Can, City No. 11?

However, since the day of that memorable fight in a bar, I never drank, at least – to such a state.
*never got drunk

Dark alloy poured into my blood as easy and as natural as in the City's architecture No. 11.
Separately.

Interest? Me!?
Usually first writing a question mark, then exclamation. And looks beautiful:
To me?!

Sometimes I remember how it lived, but nothing reluctant to return.
After a nothing need a comma.

One of the operatives from our area who fought in City-17 told me that even after the explosion atop the Citadel, he managed to rout the rebel group.
After a City-17 need a comma.

Found on the roof of a sufficiently large coil of rope, I tied it around one of the metal equipment,
*supports

In a relatively peaceful time like this, the set of pulse guns and rocket launchers just don't need
Before and after you like this need commas.

All this is nothing compared to the main feature of the body – spitting acid
*their

"Laugh after the word "zombine""
For quotes within quotes it is customary to use German, the so-called legs:
"Laugh after the word "zombine""

But to fulfill the terms of the deal with enemies is against our moral principles
*enemies

Anything suspicious or illegal to assemble such equipment, no – it's not homemade the Gauss rifle, capable of punching through even armour century этак15 th (for comparison, a classic AKM, in principle, does not break).
There is not enough space. And century it is necessary to write Roman numerals.

And after three days, I, Tirelo, the Rhine and our guys had to smoke La and his entire gang of thugs from South of the slums.
Smoke La?

The phrase "INDISCRIMINATE TARGETING" was just on the page describing the procedure for conducting actions to reduce population, which I happened to be not one or even two times in my life. In my memory at least ten to fifteen of such cleansing in different Districts. In our prosperous City No. 11 occasionally conducted such operations, generally in disadvantaged areas with high crime. So "LETHAL FORCE" in my work I had to apply quite often. But the item "INDISCRIMINATE TARGETING" on the contrary, I was guided very rare.
Probably, early still should be LETHAL FORCE.

And nothing adorns a goal, like getting into her proper shell.
*none

–Here, b...b! – I could not resist, and then immediately turned to the frightened woman, Yes, not you, girl!
The comma after"Yes" is not needed.

All the myths about the unity of the universal and deadly hatred to the Alliance is only a myth. And do not say that they are all slaves. I also once thought so.
And why is it in bold? Some kind of tagging? The important phrase that is necessary to pay attention to is not like.

And finally – the bite in the throat. Their jaws are perfectly adapted for this.
*for

Okay, fuck it – from what I'm going to shout, it is better to drive my subordinate is still not going to, and with the box and a scratch on the bumper, nothing will change.
with the box and a scratch on the bumper, nothing will change?

The scene was already disengaged, stood around operatives
*cordoned off. Or it unhooked and moved closer?

I was in no hurry to enable the remote – then the criminals will start to twitch from the pain the recruit may feel pity.
Or the rookie is needed, either instead of then should be when, before the recruit need a comma.

At the time, I avoided this test – I've killed enough people during the portal storms.
Portal Storms. With A Capital Letter. And now - separately (in this context).

Those who are not place in such a high institution as the Alliance.
Or no place or no place

Techs that were with us decided to check out the room in case of fire, in that time, as the doctors helped the victims.
The comma after time is not needed.

I went to the nearest window and looked out at him, staring at the Citadel.
After a window need I.

I grabbed his gun and instantly ran to the entrance.
*to the entrance

So, the key map...
*key card

And my pursuit?
Page 54, highlighted in red. Again tagged something?

Even things like the refraction of rays of light was corrected! Yes there is! And my pursuit?
That's so stupid, trying to kill time for the stupid computer game "Manhack arcade".
That so stupid?

The instrument container is suddenly moved to the ready mode, starting to scan the area around, but not opening fire
The comma after but is not needed.

While we are trying to contact 91 of the second division of mechanized infantry, but nothing comes out.
Either but nothing comes out or but nothing comes out

Aim was difficult, despite the fact that my ЛР420
Maybe I should still write it in Latin?

A couple of shots breaks to stop the existence of badly wounded terrorist
Or stop do not need, or stop replace with stop and breaks to remove.

The Centre is still there, but we reach out to with Consul-Administrator Weiss.
with don't.

But who cares, I don't even feel sorry for him.
not need to move one word to the right.

The column stops while sharing the right building and the house occupied by the rebels, we leave the car.
After stop we need a comma.

–What's the difference? – she yells when partner pulls her back to the truck
*to the truck

Lech managed to get us on the street corner and we quickly went under the cross-fire, but then things turned even worse.
*under

on their legs fell in live guns, spewing small streams of deadly bullets-the hornets and lizards spitting acid spores
*spitting

Still, fifteen millimeters Dark alloy and a coating of nanosec!
*cover

This under the belly landing of the container no, he's in combat configuration, the V-16G something like that, which Adrian Shepard almost crushed the car Freeman.
Think we should move the comma after the configuration and right below it was after"V-16G. No?

To seven-hour war, people power was not even in the theoretical calculations.
With A Capital Letter.

On 77-79-Oh pages the text is highlighted roswinkel.

Well, nothing, if only to find the gun ...
The space before the dot is not needed.

I can barely contain my sigh of regret because I do not possess any of them.
Separately.

Someone from bandits sprashyvaet
*asks

as soon as we appear on the street, I see in the yard of a corps of six or seven missiles, not counting those that were in the house.
*six or seven

Taking advantage of her, I grabbed Irina by the arm and run away, without knowing where I'm running.
*not knowing where to escape. In my opinion, it sounds better.

–No, but some of the costumes, I had never seen, even in military parades.
*of these. And after you see need a comma.

Now I'm Gordon Freeman. But unlike Freeman present
One real don't.

we turn around and take bullets two more rebels, Irina this time, calm, cold and evil.
The comma after once is not needed.

Say, a year between the incident in "black Mesa"
*Mesa

a large number of people died and were victims of headcrabs.
Maybe more?

I hear the rumble and see that it is all bad – harvesters are seen, and two V-24 already safely removed to the side of the Citadel, one of them knocks light smoke – praise the Gauss.
*very bad things

But why run if I got a conviction.
Is point need a question mark.

Jireh has to be repaired.
*to obey. Or someone broke, and she want to get it running again?

His "not girlfriend" on the contrary, very calmly accept what is happening, she tries to think clearly and not let emotions and fear take over.
really don't. Or it should be moved two words to the right.

And the lack of news about Caroline Lansing is also not the best way affects me
*best

Not sooner had the dust cloud to dissipate as I saw crowned with the impulse gun is the face of Strider,
*cloud

Well, sometimes war changes people ive best.
Separately.

A squad of tough – CSO fighters wear some new costumes, very similar to the HEV, the 5-Oh model.
*it. *similar.
This combo!

We, I think, too, of such a one seen.
Maybe that's not a bug, but probably should be also this one.

Now, when we this machine, we get the rebels also deeply as Adrian Shepard and his guys did not put them under the "White Grove" and Ravenholm.
Separately in this context.

In which case head and the shoulder straps will be removed from me.
After the what need a comma.

Strider makes a strange sound, and a pair of guided missiles, rushing towards him at full speed, describing circles around the tripod crashed into the asphalt.
*rushing

I note that it is well equipped: it wears recently adopted pixel urban camouflage coloring
he found too often. The second can be removed.

Help us to suppress grenadiers – all your Ionia!
*and they. Also combos.

Especially because I so full of weapons.
Separately in this context.

Lee Yang, is still used assault rifle, shoots from behind favorite shotgun.Damn, still it's irresistible with weapons in their hands!
There is not enough space.

Unusual in itself that he was not on the ceiling, and the earth.
*and in the thickness

Soon, it seemed, inexhaustible head of ant lions is weakened.
The comma after seemed not needed.

One of the insects unlucky to be a break in the wall of the tunnel. It's crippling phosphorescent green spit, beetle shrieking and twitching in unbearable pain, until the acid bullsquid corrodes his body. Only those gluttons for us there was not enough! But even they can not afford to stop the advance of the detachment of the Alliance. However, several soldiers have to get rid of chest racks and armor, and even jackets, but to cast them away. But there are no losses. We shoot, we explode, we cut their tongues out
Who are they cut languages? About barnacles there was nothing there.

So we every day eating, shooting and marching.
Separately in this context.

Your mother, so it was necessary to contrive to jump on the head of Messi Arsenal Christmas special?
Or how I had contrived, or instead of a question mark needs an exclamation/dot.

And although they were periodically examined sterilizers, stokers, spraying a caustic disinfectant solution and vigorous agneses (you call them crematorium)
That we call them the crematorium was discussed at the 97th page.

Now, we the underpass.
*we

And why on the 107th page for such a long period?

However, this is nothing says: all the modern weapons and ammunition produced by the Alliance.
*produced

Judging by the badge of a dark alloy, this man belonged to the North-Western management, the City number 11
With A Capital Letter.

Yes, girls are not every one of them loses.
After a Yes need a comma.

Compared to him, V-16, directing the laser at our convoy, locked at the Arms Street
After a him we need a comma.

I somehow doubted that this four-engine flying armored beast it is for our souls.
The comma after I is not needed.

I may not like ordinary people, but unlike the rebels and other bastards they do not deserve such a terrible fate.
*the difference; after bastards need a comma.

"Lethal Force" and this time it did not misfire.
You usually wrote in caps, LETHAL FORCE.

Well, we are trying not to waste time in vain, and undermined away from this place.
and is not needed.

Twice I had to change the battery in a belt module of the vest is to rely on base strength
The sentence is not finished.

–Now you understand why, eh!? Figured I ask!
After the ask needs a question mark.

He quickly puts the veil in the me place, then we wait very long.
Who it?

Briefly describing the situation and listened to me, he gave a single order to repel the forces of the Council until the arrival of reinforcements. When I asked for reinforcements, he replied with a reassuring smile:
Or replace the first reinforcement in reinforcement, or replace the second reinforcement in reinforcement.

Yes, you can go. They paused, but only briefly.
Not enough dashes separating the cue from the words of the author.

– a group of rebels stopped, staring at Tony.
*on

evil muttered Francois La Brett, Pointing their weapons in the face of the hunter.
With a small letter.

Behind him the saz runs the guardsman, clad in heavy armor.
*immediately

–Yahoo! – Yelling Blakely – It was fu[antimat]cking beautiful!
With a small letter.

I noticed one of necrotico standing behind the cash register and looking at him.
Or replace standing to standing and after of necrotic a comma, or replace looking for looking.

–And if so it will never end?
Separately in this context.

The rebels are ruthless to the Alliance just as the Alliance to them.
Separately in this context.

TH-shnaya form, remaining in the warehouses after the first 10 years of the Alliance, gave just such
*issued

So, things are on the mend.
I think it lost the word go or come.

At a time when I wanted to talk to the tank commander, Siena one of the nearby houses were demolished.
*wall

What is it this time? – I ask?
So intended? He's not sure he asks or not? Or is it after I should be a full stop, not question mark?

I appeal to Neumann:
–Yeah, man, it sucks. Eh... – turning to Tirelo, I ask – what do you think? Christ is risen?
I think you are confused, to whom he appealed first. Neumann and Tirelo should be reversed.

the fighter broke away from staring at the cyborg standing at the wall.
Cyborg only had one. Isn't it?

AP2 I removed. Preparing another update.

The picture of SMG edited in Peine (readers: find 3 differences... of course, if you wish).

Lukashenko? I do not know. Maybe one of the Citadels appeared right at the place of his residence, and the old man faced little sister of Dan Abrams somewhere in a vacuum of one of the worlds of the Alliance... yeah, Zhirinovsky turned into a zombie (though he no headcrab able to swear), and of the United Russia party polls made the stokers.

Signal delivers only a pulse weapon, but it is like two or three firearms and anyhow-to be issued. And kominowski SCAR - this is a common military gun, even very good, but by the standards of the Alliance - a penny. In addition, Smartbox that in times of Reva began to hang up on everything, have not yet brought into active use.

Rather, the device simply was not at hand.

Yes, religion is left. Only went underground. Muhahahahahaha! *hint the last surviving priest, and one of the places where there is a Church*

No, I have the subtitles and chants his name was Nihilator. Besides, it is more convenient to the pronunciation.

The sun, aka VS. Vasiliev, semen or Steven Vance. Or A Higher Power. Or even Voronin Sergey, too, a couple of autobiographical moments there. :-) Or a randomly generated code of the Alliance.

Well, that Stalin was a good enough politician. He wasn't perfect, but he did quite a lot. The Alliance could use his image in their propaganda.

By the way, they call the streets in honor of Nazi scientists. One way or another, and they really made a great contribution to the development of medicine.

G is a G-Man. And the number is the rank in the hierarchy of the Alliance. 10-31 but doesn't know that!

Edith, no, still Indiscriminate Target, because Flying Force are on every page, not just downsizing.

Shame on me Zhi-Shi and being distracted from basic grammar when writing at work.

Not in the yard of what?-case and in the courtyard of the housing of six or seven what?missiles

No. Tyrel and the dead corpse Neumann in their places.

For example, if you fix it like this:
–No, commander – meets cyborg, not quite knowing to whom I speak and what's the point of my comrades put in the phrase "Christ is risen".


FGD, screamers we have recently showed, by the way...

As if there are still someone who doesn't know about it.
Yyy, I know it's already three years at least xD

Detailed kament and the first impression Combinat annealed))

I have, unfortunately, no time or desire to read kreo, especially because right now, firmly hooked on the Philip K. dick - a very distinctive writer, the most filmed of all, by the way (blade Runner (Balderunner), dissenting opinion (Minority Report), paycheck (Paycheck), Alien (Impostor), Screamers (Screamers), even the total Recall with Schwarzenegger - here is a partial list of films based on his stories and novels...)

Another update, unfinished. Post for yourself, but others to watch too.

http://alyx-haters.ru/forum/18-337-2#19109

Ready update!

http://alyx-haters.ru/forum/18-337-3#20122