Area GO-schnick (Half-Life 2)
So, ladies and gentlemen, and, if so, ladies, I have news for you. I decided that a few topics for me is too fat, but because of all the further work I will upload here in the old theme of the story Real-Life. I also asked for help to _Lemon_'y, and he helped me to get my Affairs in order, deleting all other threads with my kreo. In addition, almost all the posts with old fragments of RL I deleted. The reasons for this are two:1. They are very imperfect, and absolutely everything. And that's an understatement...
2. Currently I'm sitting on a weak laptop and a slow Internet connection. Even 200 posts is problematic, especially with text and pictures.
New posts with links to update all my works look in to the end of a topic or closer to it. I plan to continue four of kreo:
1. Actually Real-Life.
2. Salvage.
3. The eighth branch.
4. The Story Of Dan Abrams.
Crossovers with Doom and StarCraft continue not get, because honestly they are terrible. But if the Star-Life at least I practiced a bit in the descriptions of everything, the Hell was stupidly consequence of the attack of graphomania. If we go back to good stories, I once again urge you: do not hesitate to comment and criticize. For your review you can be patient and not like that. :-)
FGD and gdezh scathing review of half a page of A4?
First, why only columns? Although it depends on the font...
Secondly, I'm lazy, although I've read all but the last two passages and I have a bunch of comments. It is important not to forget by the time all these comments ^_^
Minitrader... to eat? No way!
+1
I read it! Mdja-with... the Language is simply brilliant! Easy to read. Future real writer! But... the ideology...
If you put his work on Prose.ru modern neo-fascists will make you a guru, like Nietzsche...
if you want to meet a beautiful new world – to see it become one, it have pretty clean - a terrible word!
From the insights will refrain, will wait until...
I do not know what the author so long sasnals, but completely agree with the opinion HelenaNochka as extractpart)
HelenaNochka well, I don't like to argue with fans about I doubt its value(except that it will surpass Road Rush 3 Sega, which of course will not), and a fascist, and so I won't)since I was vaccinated against all this satanic plague during baptism:)
HelenaNochka what is the Alliance?Well, actually, I was originally on their side, and I have no Alliance, the Empire, the State or any Union does not bypasses)
I thought I zabil? But the crowbar!
Phew, still alive... I'm alive! I'm still alive, your mother! Ah ha ha, no, guys, I have something Yes will fit, in addition to catching muggers Yes, stooping young girls.
Author, you GRT wrote about yourself?If only you spent days caught the gopas(which by the way is in nature, it does not exist, except for those idiots who think that they are, and therefore consider themselves, the gopas, but they are not gopas and assholes, kids, and just a little immature, blunt people) and bend over young girls, then you wouldn't have time to write all this.Heros fake it
the satanic contagion - apologize.
The author, you GRT wrote about yourself? - no of course! Us now you know my approximate attitude of the rebel
Where this post interestnoy personality and where does satanika infection? In General, the author of the post will let him go providitsa. Just who could be interested? The author writes cool, by the way, I rebel too, more than you hate.
Reading everything I've missed during the absence.
Style happy story, too.
That's just the English in some places need to improve. There are gross errors.
Delivered offer Rebel got hand weapons.:)
Read on, later, I will unsubscribe more in detail.
Hand weapons? So... Hmm, confusing moment. It was necessary to write exposed. Eng - you can specify? After all the correction and editing should be conducted.
Eng - you can specify?
Yes please:
Goddamn it, even I am can be such agent.
Can - modal verb, to be in any form in front of him can not be.
Maybe the rebels, but it doesn't looks like.
Not looks and look. In the Present Simple s is added to the verb only in affirmative sentences.
I ended up going for a run, maybe something else will catch. I just first read, then look out for mistakes.
Cryalien
No offense, please, to Darksider! He didn't read your work. He was just passing by, saw the word fascism, written by me, and that is what he called a satanic plague. Apparently accumulated in the shower. Don't take it personally!
PS: Feel guilty (relative)... looking forward to the continuation...
Ufff, reading.
Looking forward to continue. 10-31 I really like your view of the world.
But still a lot of shootings we need to dilute the drama, IMHO.
Tomorrow I will comb through the story in search of errors.
Good piece. Come again.
For Nihi: In the story there is the idea of Stripping the Land, and that it is the same.