Unreal creativity. (Unreal)
People, and somebody does something(scarlet), in the universe? Can adelisa, if someone card drawing, just sample Wallpapers or something?I wrote the beginning of Aquila.
Please check out, give constructive criticism...
Unreality.
1.Vortex Rikers
Wildly headache - as if it was hit with something very heavy. Hands and feet badly obeyed, coordination of movements was broken. Very interesting from the outside. Want to reach out to the left, and it instead rises.
Not counting the sounds of some birds was very quiet. Birds?! But there could be no birds. I...
Was drifting memories: the streets of night city, a spaceport, my naive attempts to get away from the chase...
Them will not go away unless they themselves don't want to. And then gray inconspicuous clothing, a dozen such as I, a military ship carrying prisoners, and radioactive mines at the end. Mines where I was supposed to get as a criminal, but for some reason were not included. Mines where you can live for two years max - then you just fall apart because of the radiation. This is a very good idea. Criminals need to be put somewhere, ore someone had to mine. Certain death.
I stood up, and looked around. The hull of the ship had the form of the letter P. On both sides of the camera with the prisoners. Across the Elevator to other levels: technical, medical. We were brought here by another corridor, but the device of these ships is like. If you know one, you know the other.
Okay, enough of the lyrics need to get out!
Laser grids that separates my camera from the rest of the ship was not. In their place, stuck some wires showered sparks. Apparently our ship was in serious trouble. Out of camera(just a hole in the wall), I saw even more devastation. Everywhere were scattered pieces of skin, half of the information screens were not working, the power cables were taken out of fasteners.
Stepping forward, I barely kept my balance. Need a first aid kit and quickly.
Strange but me in the compartment was empty. Neither living nor dead. Did everyone survive? And left without me?
Walking through the adjacent chambers and not finding anything, went to the Elevator to the second level.
Elevator, strangely enough worked. Right at the exit lay a small box. Turning it I found that this is quite a standard PDA. That's good luck! PDA have long turned to the senior assistant to the person. Without him the modern world was very uncomfortable. And most importantly in the distant past were initial problems of early devices: low performance, small memory footprint, a short time battery life. Modern devices had a memory capacity of tens of Terabytes, and the battery life was up to a few weeks. In addition they were very versatile in the choice of power source: almost all forms of electromagnetic energy they can be powered. In General an absolutely necessary thing. Such a thing was given to me for nothing given my current situation.
Running a self test(all of a sudden any bugs or broken in the accident) I went through the second level. One grating from the ventilation system was not enough, she was lying down. Assessing the passage I crawled. The entire shaft was shrouded in smoke – apparently cover and ventilation. It was uncomfortable to crawl partially prevented the smoke , partially the small size of the mine at which I was crawling. A turn , another turn. Away flashed someone's figure or it seemed to me? No thought, it's just steam from the crumpled pipe.
I fell out unexpectedly. This is the medical lab. Well look for medications. The laboratory was a – probably the main blow fell on the nose or on the other side. However, the drug has not been here. Someone before me took them. And apparently they took a large group of people – one to carry them all just not able to do. Well look for those who also survived like me.
Passing the door leading to the bridge I saw broken glass in the Cabinet with the medications. So-so.
But on the bridge was much more interesting. I visited a couple of times in these areas and know that they are typically a focus of modern technology. But that is so! Oh this is a difficult ship, uneasy. Simple prison, the carrier cannot be absolutely equipped. They were usually converted from old ships and, accordingly, nothing special with him, it was impossible to do. Here could be seen a thorough job. However, the military always do everything thoroughly.
Half of the screens were broken. The second was some writing. Coming closer, I tried to read them.
"..... refused main engines. After a few minutes the stability of hyperfields will fall. We come out of jump in the system 831. Will try to correct course....."
"..... navigation calculations showed that we can land a spacecraft on the planet na Pali....."
So I first learned the name of the planet na Pali. I didn't know how crucial the planet . All star atlases almost nothing about it is not written. There is no intelligent life – this is the verdict of the Space Agency. Now I understand why... At that moment I wanted only one thing – to survive.
To get out, it's time to get out, insisted to the subconscious.
After passing the bridge I climbed into yet another pipe. Crawling down to the end of it I went into compressor and a huge fan was stopped. Soon there will be nothing to breathe. In the end I could see a large hangar door. Coming closer I pressed the open button. The door went up. Waiting when it will open fully I stepped inside. It was a small room. On the opposite side was the same door. But even for her there were voices!
- Well, what now ... Oh, what the heck is this?! No !!!
Came a wild scream, then he heard the sound of the shot. Once, twice ...
Thoughts darted feverishly: what was it? People can't scream.
CpaHblN 4onNk
And the name of your book what? And in fact it must still be find on this website.
Well, well... the Campaign, not see me books about Unreal, as their ears. CpaHblN 4onNk, where are you-e-e?
Most annoying is that! it's not just some nabialek posts like me, and really passionate writer. And generally it is strange: he says that, say, mega-book, is appended, and as it is called, modestly silent. Yes, any normal writer have bragged about your book to potential readers. Otherwise who read it will that be?
JetRanger Mr. Cho, sooki, did not wait??! I'm just piggy stuck for six months, there were no forums... Book is called Call and covers the events of all three classic tournament from 1999 to 2004, not counting the freaking third. Going to add some more platformers Unreal Championships when you defeat them in the emulator. Don't advertise it specially in order to give this part of his work a solidity - a lot of sites about fanfiction publish such blatant nonsense that I'm afraid it will repel serious readers, who did not play in the series. Here untwist their other, more serious works - will be promoted at the expense of UT! Now the whole thing has pozaprostir - master three to get in UT2003-2004 Pak new female characters in order to expand the storyline of the games and to bring the entire idea to a new story campaign, which, perhaps, overcome their forces in brylowski editors at least to the pre-alpha stage... in Short, plenty of plans, scribbled in rare intervals that there litsite with my book - don't even know... I Think I'll be here often to answer any arising General idea questions.
Oh, well, finally! At last! Endlich! ))
Here only did not understand one: how can influence new models of the characters in the book plot???
JetRanger
New models of the characters will affect the plot of the games first and foremost, and the book's plot will turn in the field of the spin-off, not limited the current framework. It's Unreal, and a new story will give games the opportunity to confirm it!
But there is something to read about Unreal? By the way, Hello to Araldica, long time did not come here))
CpaHblN 4onNk
o_o ??? Became even more confusing. )) Well, never mind. The main thing - that the book is still out (for free download or online reading). I wish you success.
Nexuses
I was looking for something to read, but found only a few fan-ficou inglish, both for Kiera Almanova. One is called"Avenging Angel and the other I do not remember as there the wreck of the ISV-Kran'a the beginning. The second, by the way, I stil liked it a lot more Angel'a, but he, alas, was never finished by the author.
But in Russian so I do anilino-art failed to find. Planet of the Grail and the Liberator (again, unfinished) Olga Danilova doesn't count, because there is only the Unreal, the basis is much changed, and thought, although the books themselves are quite good.
JetRanger
It is a pity that there are no such books, but something about Stalker is almost all read:) And inglish to read - it's just a perversion)) Via a Prompt or something to get rid of...
By the way, recently passed mod Final World, he's so gluconates that horror. So there could not finish the ending, powerful brakes at the final level. Nobody knows what it is, no one has come to the end?
Nexuses
And inglish to read - it's just a perversion)) Via a Prompt or something to get rid of...
Futile - all these Promty and Google translators great lyrics can't translate.
By the way, I could translate those books in Russian, but I do not know whether. After all, Unreal, unlike UT, there are very few who remember, and this forum in General had died long ago.
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PS: About the Final World - I know nothing, because of the mods and only play in a magnificent Return to Na-Pali. Was thinking the other day to download the famous Operation Na-Pali, but I looked on YouTube and changed his mind - he seemed tracheo-Amateur.
JetRanger
Mod Operation Na-Pali may tracheo-Amateur, but great - it is possible to command the NPC, including Skaara rebel against the mercenaries, even with skaare in the end unite! Settlement on the flying Islands, zombie Nali? the revolutionaries-Nali and return on Board crashed in the first part of the Vortex Rikers, the rescue of a woman - so much! And quite atmospheric done efficiently, including running around all the giant ruins! Voice quality, Muse well matched, though not written specifically for the fashion, as, for example, in Neo Cairo. In short, I flooded, played with gusto! Yes, the stuff in the plot is secondary, and frankly weak, but a follow-up adventure more than compensates for this weakness! By the way, the mod - Project Zephon Battle For Freedom is also very good and keeps the General idea of war, humanity, and Skaara, not forgetting about Kirillov and mercenaries, and other unreal kotovasiya. At the same time, oddly enough, these mods expand the boundaries have to be honest, not enough of the Unreal universe and contribute to its viability is clearly better than the official games of misery for authorship corrupt Epic.
JetRanger
By the way, my opinion about the third part of UT I especially relish expressed in his Susan. If you're interested - here is the link http://timbajeeez.livejournal.com/49417.html
CpaHblN 4onNk
Well if so, then look ever all of those mods. In the next topic recently, just advise the spec. the website unrealsp.org ; there mods analnyh - a whole heap, and even reviews. As will appear more free time, so play in them.
it is possible to command the NPC, including Skaara rebel against the mercenaries, even with skaare in the end unite! Settlement on the flying Islands, zombie Nali? the revolutionaries-Nali and return on Board crashed in the first part of the Vortex Rikers, the rescue of a woman - so much! And quite atmospheric done efficiently, including running around all the giant ruins!
I agree. I believe that the UNP is still one of the best and clever additions. But if you're too attached to Canon, you may not like.
Muse well matched, although not written specifically for fashion
They have, like, your the composer was.
official game-misery for authorship corrupt Epic.
I, too, once all games in the series after ут99 shit watered, but later calmed his popabol. In ут2004 and UT3 is quite possible to play and even enjoy (in U2 don't know, not played). But to attribute them to one universe with Anilam one.
By the way, my opinion about the third part of UT I especially relish expressed in his Susan. If you're interested - here is the link timbajeeez.livejournal.com/49417.html
To criticize the story of the tournament was an empty case. He doesn't have to be, not something to be good.
sn260591
You, comrade, that said: to Criticize the story of the tournament was an empty case. He doesn't have to be, not something to be good.
And here I strongly disagree - with all of that, starting with UT, the story itself was not, however, UT 2004 Assault mode was present for the battle, based on occurring events once, and the participation of the player was kind of attached to the history of the universe Unreal. So the creators of UT 3, by their own assurances, just the SAME AND CREATED NOT JUST a SET of CHARACTERS, WHOSE BIOGRAPHY CAN be STUPID FLICK through LIKE IN PREVIOUS GAMES, AND gave THEM NOT ONLY DIFFERENT CHARACTERS, BUT IN the APPENDAGE ATTRIBUTED to THEM a SERIOUS MOTIVATION - REVENGE FOR the VICTIMS. And with that story at the time for the whole world thundered Max Payne: no more, no less, and Unreal shooter! Themselves and the developers have stated that they coined a NEW WORD IN the HISTORY of SHOOTERS - the WAR ACCORDING to the RULES of the TOURNAMENT! That is, not according to the rules of strategy, tactics, attack, defense, flanking attacks and other wisdom, which was used before our era, NAMELY the RULES of the TOURNAMENT, WHERE the winner is NOT the ARMY, WHICH has MORE EQUIPMENT, BETTER TRAINED SOLDIERS AND MORE than COMPETENT MILITARY leader, AND the ARMY, the SOLDIERS of WHICH, for EXAMPLE, STUPIDLY DRAGGED MORE FLAGS within a CERTAIN TIME!!!! And this is also a serious sporting application of running around the arena and move up in the standings. And if the application for a plot was to criticize the plot has the right to any analgsic, at least in order to understand how deep in the ass of the technological race without a hint of the meaning of mired the entire series.
Themselves and the developers have stated that they coined a NEW WORD IN the HISTORY of SHOOTERS - the WAR ACCORDING to the RULES of the TOURNAMENT! That is, not according to the rules of strategy, tactics, attack, defense, flanking attacks and other wisdom, which was used before our era, NAMELY the RULES of the TOURNAMENT, WHERE the winner is NOT the ARMY, WHICH has MORE EQUIPMENT, BETTER TRAINED SOLDIERS AND MORE than COMPETENT MILITARY leader, AND the ARMY, the SOLDIERS of WHICH, for EXAMPLE, STUPIDLY DRAGGED MORE FLAGS within a CERTAIN TIME!!!!
It seems you have not carefully listened to what they talked about, the characters in the rollers. There the war began to actively use respawner from the tournament, and to defeat the enemy or to knock him temporarily from the territory, it is necessary either to arrange banal DM, depriving respawner charge, either to destroy himself respawner (DF, Varfar). But again, I repeat, that feature of the game completely in the story and in multiplayer: the campaign was only for familiarization and warm-up, so the script is not particularly zadrachivat.
Yes, MORE EQUIPMENT, BETTER TRAINED SOLDIERS AND a MORE COMPETENT MILITARY leader are also in the tournament plays a role in the victory.
Yes, the third Anril, no one criticizes, it just almost nobody plays... Without a single game series is doomed to failure. Most players are not hardcore, standing jumps around the arena harrass normal players. Need a plot, some mystery, like what's next? And what will the ending be?. Well, of course, and not this castration as Aquila 2, and not so grim up there. So what about the fate of the UT 4 can not worry - it simply safecat. Would have Crisis one multiplayer Obezbashennaya graphics and physics - he would tries nobody would need...